I will give up the working time for more getting free time
학생이 쓴 원문
I love to get free time.. really love it
and I wish I used to that time for self development like learning English.
I want to reduce working for getting free time.
also if I will have too much time for free I will go to oversea trip and I\'m thinking of going Palawan
I\'m ready to go there
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. I appreciate you doing your homework. Thank you for taking the time to write this essay despite your busy schedule. I hope you could get a lot of free time and finally go on that trip to Palawan that you have already planned for. Good luck. Let\'s talk tomorrow. Have a good night. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
I love to get free time.. really love it
>>> I really love getting/ having free time.
and I wish I used to that time for self development like learning English.
>>> And I wish I could use that time for self-development like learning English.
I want to reduce working for getting free time.
>>> CORRECT =)
also if I will have too much time for free I will go to oversea trip and I\'m thinking of going Palawan
>>> Also, if I will have more than enough free time I will go on an overseas trip and I am thinking of going to Palawan.
I\'m ready to go there
>>> I am ready to go there.
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