I will go bussiness trip tomorrow

2014-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1. She doesn't know how to SERVICE. 2. The food is very SALThy. 3. You should avoid INDULGENCE in foods. 4. The guy is really FUNny. 5. She's good at ENTERTAINing guests Since this month, I have been really busy. I think time gose fly. Tomorrow, I will go bussiness trip to Busan where the distance between here is more than 300 kilometer. Probably, It takes about 3~4 hours. It would be better not to go there. I think I should take pillow so that I can take a sleep in the bus. Since there is not enough time to eat lunch, we should eat by one self. Anyway, Carolyn is having party with her coworkers. She is comming now, so I would like to go the main gate. thank you teacher~! have a nice dream

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!

You\'re so sweet. Sweet dreams too. Hihihihihi.

Thank you very much for doing a lot of homework tonight.

I hope that you\'ll arrive safe in Busan,

Take a lot of rest tonight to gain energy for tomorrow.

Please go over the corrections below.

Take care

Teacher Nina


1. She doesn\'t know how to SERVICE.

>> serve
2. The food is very SALThy.

>> salty
3. You should avoid INDULGENCE in foods.

>> indulging
4. The guy is really FUNny.

>> correct
5. She\'s good at ENTERTAINing guests

>> correct

Since this month, I have been really busy.

>> I have been really busy this month. 
I think time gose fly.

>> I think time really flies.
Tomorrow, I will go bussiness trip to Busan where the distance between here is more than 300 kilometer.

>> Tomorrow. I will go on a business trip to Busan and the distance from here is about three hundred kilometers.

Probably, It takes about 3~4 hours.

>> Probably, it will take about three to four hours.
It would be better not to go there. 

>> It would be better if I won\'t go there.
I think I should take pillow so that I can take a sleep in the bus.

>> I think I should take a pillow so that I can sleep on the bus.
Since there is not enough time to eat lunch, we should eat by one self.

>> Since there isn\'t enough time to eat lunch together, we should eat by ourselves.

Anyway, Carolyn is having party with her coworkers. 

>> Anyway, Carolyn is having a party with her co-workers.
She is comming now, so I would like to go the main gate.

>> She is coming now, so I should go to the main gate.
thank you teacher~!

>> Thank you, teacher. 
have a nice dream

>> correct

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