I will go bussiness trip tomorrow
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Hello there [이름]!
You\'re so sweet. Sweet dreams too. Hihihihihi.
Thank you very much for doing a lot of homework tonight.
I hope that you\'ll arrive safe in Busan,
Take a lot of rest tonight to gain energy for tomorrow.
Please go over the corrections below.
Take care
Teacher Nina
1. She doesn\'t know how to SERVICE.
>> serve
2. The food is very SALThy.
>> salty
3. You should avoid INDULGENCE in foods.
>> indulging
4. The guy is really FUNny.
>> correct
5. She\'s good at ENTERTAINing guests
>> correct
Since this month, I have been really busy.
>> I have been really busy this month.
I think time gose fly.
>> I think time really flies.
Tomorrow, I will go bussiness trip to Busan where the distance between here is more than 300 kilometer.
>> Tomorrow. I will go on a business trip to Busan and the distance from here is about three hundred kilometers.
Probably, It takes about 3~4 hours.
>> Probably, it will take about three to four hours.
It would be better not to go there.
>> It would be better if I won\'t go there.
I think I should take pillow so that I can take a sleep in the bus.
>> I think I should take a pillow so that I can sleep on the bus.
Since there is not enough time to eat lunch, we should eat by one self.
>> Since there isn\'t enough time to eat lunch together, we should eat by ourselves.
Anyway, Carolyn is having party with her coworkers.
>> Anyway, Carolyn is having a party with her co-workers.
She is comming now, so I would like to go the main gate.
>> She is coming now, so I should go to the main gate.
thank you teacher~!
>> Thank you, teacher.
have a nice dream
>> correct
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