I will have chicken at school

2017-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Tommorrow our class will have chicken at school.Our class representative team won the sports game.So,school gave 200dollars to our class.My teacher order chicken.And tommorrow after P.E.class we will eat chicken.And maybe I will go to Dongyeok's house and have ramen.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Wow! You know how I love chicken, right?

Please give me some. kkk

Enjoy eating chicken tomorrow!

Have a great night!

_Teacher Dianne ^^

Tommorrow our class will have chicken at school.

>> Our class will have chicken for tomorrow\'s lunch at school.

Our class representative team won the sports game.So,school gave 200dollars to our class.

>> Our class representative of the team won the sports game. So, the school gave 200 dollars to our class.

My teacher order chicken.And tommorrow after P.E.class we will eat chicken.

>> My teacher ordered chicken and tomorrow after our P.E. class we will eat chicken.

And maybe I will go to Dongyeok\'s house and have ramen.

>> correct

>> or: Maybe I\'m going to Dongyeok\'s house and have ramen after.

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