I will introuduce my family.

My family memebers are dad,mom,younger brother and me. First my dad is a doctor he has 3 office to work and he is very busy so we don't have much time to play with him even in the weekends.But l still like him because when he got out of the country he always buys me a little present, and he plays well when he is with us. Second my mom is a doctor too.My mom has two faces.She is sometime very scary like a witch but sometimes very nice to us.Well i i get ell in to it well but when i was young i cries alot! Next i my younger brother.My brother makes our family laugh.So we are very enthusiastic because of my brother.My brother is very cute and weird and sometime kind of disgusting.Because he make cute face when my mom is mad and when he is weird is while he is sleeping.He throw his doll out from the bed.And my brother is disgusting too becuase he didn't was hand after he peed(Well sometimes does!). The bonus is my dog Noori.she is a toy poodle(small poodle).she is very cute.That all~

[이름] thanks for sending in your composition. As usual, good job! You express yourself well. Be thankful for having an amazing family, do not take them for granted (^_^0. Remember, not everyone is lucky enough to grow up in a happy, loving family. Be thankful and treasure them always.  (~_~)

Anyway, I know you are tired, so I hope you have a good rest tonight, you deserve it.

 

My family memebers are dad,mom,younger brother and me.

>> My family consists of my dad, mom, younger brother and me.

 First my dad is a doctor he has 3 office to work and he is very busy so we don\'t have much time to play with him even in the weekends.

>> Firstly, there's  my dad who is a doctor.

>> He works in 3 different officecs and he is very busy so we don't have much timeto play with him even in the weekends.

But l still like him because when he got out of the country he always buys me a little present, and he plays well when he is with us.

>> But I still like him because when he goes out of the country, he always buys me a little present and he plays with us.

 Second my mom is a doctor too.

>> My mom is a doctor too.

My mom has two faces.

>>Correct!
or

>> My mom has two personalities.

She is sometime very scary like a witch but sometimes very nice to us.

>> She is sometimes very scary like a witchm but sometimes she is very nice to us.

Well i i get ell in to it well but when i was young i cries alot!

>> When I  was young I cried a lot!

 Next i my younger brother.

>> Next is my younger brother.

My brother makes our family laugh.

>> Correct!

So we are very enthusiastic because of my brother.

>> Correct!

Or

>> So we are very happy vecuse of my brother.

My brother is very cute and weird and sometime kind of disgusting.

>> Correct!

Because he make cute face when my mom is mad and when he is weird is while he is sleeping.

>> Because he makes a cute face when my mom is mad and he is weird when he  is sleeping.

He throw his doll out from the bed.

>> He throws his doll out of  the bed.

And my brother is disgusting too becuase he didn\'t was hand after he peed!

>>My brother is disgusting too because he sometimes doesn't wash his hand after he pees! (-__-)

(Well sometimes does!)

>> Correct!

 The bonus is my dog Noori.

>> Correct!

she is a toy poodle(small poodle).

>> Capitalize the first letter of the first word of your sentence. Example: She is good.

>> She is a toy poodle (small poodle). (^__^)

she is very cute.

>> Capitalize the first letter of the first word of your sentence. Example: She is good.

>> She is very cute.

That all~

>>That's all. (6_6)