I will make a story, using words of day.
학생이 쓴 원문
1. The children were frightened by the thunder and lightning.
2. Two people got hurted in the accident and were taken to the hospital.
3. The results of the election hasn't been announced yet.
4. The problem was very puzzling. I couldn't figure it out.
5. I am not agree with you, and I don't think you'll ever be convinced me.
I strolled out at esplanade.
and I tuned on radio. I heard the news.
the goverment of Japan had a speech about world war 2.
the main things of news was that they were proud of their past.
they will keep praying their ancestor who should have gone to jail.
they are always makebate and they make us litigious people.
I know there are many good people in the japan who are mostly polite.
but when I hearing the word, japan I feel hostility.
If they will change, I change my hostility to hospitality.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]! What a story! Thank you for sending this in.^^ I am so glad that you are doing your best to make sentences. Keep your ideas flowing! Be careful with the spelling of the words and also with the proper capitalization.^^ If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class! See you!
Teacher Nina
1. The children were frightened by the thunder and lightning.
>> Correct!2. Two people got hurted in the accident and were taken to the hospital.
>> Two people got hurt in the accident and were taken to the hospital.3. The results of the election hasn\'t been announced yet.
>> Correct!4. The problem was very puzzling. I couldn\'t figure it out.
>> Correct!5. I am not agree with you, and I don\'t think you\'ll ever be convinced me.
>> I don\'t agree with you, and I don\'t think you\'ll ever convince me.I strolled out at esplanade.
>> I strolled in an esplanade. and I tuned on radio. I heard the news.
>> Correct
>> And I turned on the raido and heard the news.the goverment of Japan had a speech about world war 2.
>> The government of Japan had a speech about World War 2. the main things of news was that they were proud of their past.
>> The main topic of the news was they were proud of their past.they will keep praying their ancestor who should have gone to jail.
>> Did you mean: They will keep on praying to their ancestor for guidance who should have gone to jail.they are always makebate and they make us litigious people.
>> Did you mean: They are makebates and they make other people litigious.I know there are many good people in the japan who are mostly polite.
>> I know there are a lot of good people in Japan who are mostly polite. but when I hearing the word, japan I feel hostility.
>> But when I hear the word Japan, I feel hostile.If they will change, I change my hostility to hospitality.
>> If they will change, I will change my hositilty to hospitality.
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