I will make more coll paper-build robot!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello! Today is Monday but yesterday is Korean holiday-
National Foundation Day. (usually Korean National Foundation Day is 10/3 but 10/3 is Sunday.. Therefore Korean Government
Announced \"10/3 is sunday, therefore we will specify
substitute public holidays on the 4th of october.\"
I thought \'Wow, It is great!!\'
okay. 10/4, I made paper-build.
What is paper-build? It is new method of origami.
What is new method?
1.paper-build Use only A4&glue stick. (I will show image.)
2.paper-build use special block(made A4)&ponytail paper.
Today I made new robot \'Build X-mini\'
I don\'t made well. But I felt It\'s make me happy.
I will make more cool paper-build robot!!!
@@::: I insert two picture.
shabby robot picture is mine.
very cool robot picture is master\'s work.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
Today is Monday but yesterday is Korean holiday-
>>Today is Monday but yesterday is a Korean holiday-
Therefore Korean Government
Announced \"10/3 is sunday, therefore we will specify
substitute public holidays on the 4th of october.\"
Announced \"10/3 is sunday, therefore we will specify
substitute public holidays on the 4th of october.\"
>>Therefore the Korean Government announced on 10/3 Sunday specified that it\'s the
substitute public holiday for the 4th of October.\"
I made paper-build.
>>> I built a paper robot.
It is new method of origami.
>>> It is a new method of origami.
(I will show image.)
>>(I will show an image.)
Today I made new robot \'Build X-mini\'
>>Today I made a new robot \'Build X-mini\'
I don\'t made well. But I felt It\'s make me happy.
>>It\'s not well done. But I feel happy making it.
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