I will make my mother\'s own Bibimbap
학생이 쓴 원문
I will make my mother\'s own Bibimbap. It\'s very easy to make, but it\'s very healthy and delicious. You can also make it, too. I will explain how to make it. First, the ingredients are two fried eggs, rice, lots of lettuces(any vegetables), too spoon of Korean hot sauce(it can be just ordinary hot sauce), and 4 spoon of sesame oil. You can change vegetables and hot sauce that suit your taste. Second, mix them together. You can control the amount of the ingredients freely. There is lots of protein, fiber, and omega-3. I recommend it when your very busy, but you want healthy and delicious dish.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daniel! Thank you so much for sharing your mom\'s recipe. I love bibimbap, so I will definitely make this!
- Teacher Debbie
I will make my mother\'s own Bibimbap.
>> I would make my mother\'s bibimbap for them.
It\'s very easy to make, but it\'s very healthy and delicious.
>> This is a good sentence.
You can also make it, too.
>> You can make it, too.
OR
>> You can also make it.
I will explain how to make it.
>> This is a good sentence.
First, the ingredients are two fried eggs, rice, lots of lettuces(any vegetables), too spoon of Korean hot sauce(it can be just ordinary hot sauce), and 4 spoon of sesame oil.
>> First, you need two fried eggs, rice, lots of lettuce or any vegetables, two spoons of Korean hot sauce or ordinary hot sauce, and four spoons of sesame oil.
You can change vegetables and hot sauce that suit your taste.
>> You can change the vegetables and hot sauce depending on your taste.
Second, mix them together.
>> This is a good sentence.
You can control the amount of the ingredients freely.
>> This is a good sentence.
There is lots of protein, fiber, and omega-3.
>> Moreover, bibimbap has lots of protein, fiber, and omega-3.
I recommend it when your very busy, but you want healthy and delicious dish.
>> I recommend it when you\'re very busy, but you still want a healthy and delicious dish.
- Teacher Debbie
I will make my mother\'s own Bibimbap.
>> I would make my mother\'s bibimbap for them.
It\'s very easy to make, but it\'s very healthy and delicious.
>> This is a good sentence.
You can also make it, too.
>> You can make it, too.
OR
>> You can also make it.
I will explain how to make it.
>> This is a good sentence.
First, the ingredients are two fried eggs, rice, lots of lettuces(any vegetables), too spoon of Korean hot sauce(it can be just ordinary hot sauce), and 4 spoon of sesame oil.
>> First, you need two fried eggs, rice, lots of lettuce or any vegetables, two spoons of Korean hot sauce or ordinary hot sauce, and four spoons of sesame oil.
You can change vegetables and hot sauce that suit your taste.
>> You can change the vegetables and hot sauce depending on your taste.
Second, mix them together.
>> This is a good sentence.
You can control the amount of the ingredients freely.
>> This is a good sentence.
There is lots of protein, fiber, and omega-3.
>> Moreover, bibimbap has lots of protein, fiber, and omega-3.
I recommend it when your very busy, but you want healthy and delicious dish.
>> I recommend it when you\'re very busy, but you still want a healthy and delicious dish.
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