I will not go on camping, it's cumbersome.

2018-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Though how cumbersome it is, if I would carry on it, I should prepare the tent and cooking tools for my hungry stomach. I usually don't do camping. And I am married yet so I have no child to camp with. When I was in school, now not in, I have camping with my classmates far from my home place. It has performed for the educational purpose. Today, I dream about that time. I am thought of really usable memories. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^


Thank you for sending your homework.


Cheers!
Jean



Though how cumbersome it is, if I would carry on it, I should prepare the tent and cooking tools for my hungry stomach.

>> Though cumbersome, I should still prepare the tent and cooking tools for my hungry stomach.


 I usually don\'t do camping. And I am married yet so I have no child to camp with.

>> I usually don\'t go camping and although I am married, I have no child to go camping with.


 When I was in school, now not in, I have camping with my classmates far from my home place.

>> When I was a student, I went on camping trips with my classmates.


 It has performed for the educational purpose.

>> The trips were organized for educational purposes.


 Today, I dream about that time. I am thought of really usable memories.

>> I dreamt of those times today.



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