i will sleep , now

2011-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

학생이 쓴 원문

Now is 2am. I came back home by taking taxi from company. Because my work is not yet finished. These days, my body is week. So I haven't cured a cold. When like this, I think that 'Am I fall much in work? How long do I work like this?' I like this work very much but work is all of me. I hope that if I am familier with my job, I can have my time for health,familly,hobby,friends.

강사 첨삭

Hello Susan! Good morning! Yes, I hope that you will be able to adjust yourself at work to have time for other things I think that would be healthy. Do not work yourself too much. Havetime to relax. I know that you will be able to be familiar with work as soon as possible just believe in yourself. Don't forget to drink a lot of water, it helps to lessen your cold. See you tomorrow! Try to make your homework too and write it down here. ^^ T.Faye Here are your corrections: Now is 2am. >>It is 2 am now.I came back home by taking taxi from company.>>I rode a taxi coming home. Because my work is not yet finished. >>Correct!These days, my body is week. >>My body feels weak these days.So I haven\'t cured a cold. >>So my cold isn't cured yet.When like this, I think that \'Am I fall much in work? How long do I work like this?\' >>When I am like this, I sometimes think, 'Am I falling too much at work? How long will I be doing this?'I like this work very much but work is all of me. >>Correct! >>I like this work very much but I am full of work.I hope that if I am familier with my job, I can have my time for health,familly,hobby,friends. >>I hope that I will be familiar with my job so that I can have time for my health, family, hobbies, and friends.  

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