i will sleep , now
학생이 쓴 원문
Now is 2am.
I came back home by taking taxi from company.
Because my work is not yet finished.
These days, my body is week.
So I haven't cured a cold.
When like this, I think that 'Am I fall much in work? How long do I work like this?'
I like this work very much but work is all of me.
I hope that if I am familier with my job, I can have my time for health,familly,hobby,friends.
강사 첨삭
Hello Susan!
Good morning! Yes, I hope that you will be able to adjust yourself at work to have time for other things I think that would be healthy. Do not work yourself too much. Havetime to relax. I know that you will be able to be familiar with work as soon as possible just believe in yourself. Don't forget to drink a lot of water, it helps to lessen your cold. See you tomorrow! Try to make your homework too and write it down here. ^^
T.Faye
Here are your corrections:
Now is 2am.
>>It is 2 am now.I came back home by taking taxi from company.>>I rode a taxi coming home.
Because my work is not yet finished.
>>Correct!These days, my body is week.
>>My body feels weak these days.So I haven\'t cured a cold.
>>So my cold isn't cured yet.When like this, I think that \'Am I fall much in work? How long do I work like this?\'
>>When I am like this, I sometimes think, 'Am I falling too much at work? How long will I be doing this?'I like this work very much but work is all of me.
>>Correct!
>>I like this work very much but I am full of work.I hope that if I am familier with my job, I can have my time for health,familly,hobby,friends.
>>I hope that I will be familiar with my job so that I can have time for my health, family, hobbies, and friends.
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