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2018-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 May

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HOMEWORK: Answer the questions briefly. If you won a million dollars what things would you change about your life? If i won a million dollars .. I doesn't work I want travle with my familys i think, my son and daughter would have good experience it's very give a help in their life. i always only thinking for my familys I love my familys

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Sir Jae U! Thank you for doing your homework.

I like your answer. I also love my family. Travelling is also one of the best things that I like doing.

I corrected your sentences. Please try to read it. Thank you. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

If i won a million dollars ..
I doesn\'t work

>> If I won a million dollars, I am not going to work anymore.
I want travle with my familys

>> I want to travel with my family.
i think, my son and daughter would have good experience

>> My son and daughter will have good experiences.

OR >> My children will have good experiences.
it\'s very give a help in their life.

>> It will be helpful for them.
i always only thinking for my familys

>> I always think of my family.
I love my familys

>> I love my family.

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