I will talk about a article.

Hello Soo!!!

It is nice to hear from you again and I am happy that you found the time to make this composition.

I congratulate you for trying and for wanting to improve your skills more.

I really think that it would be hard for the people in both countries to be reunited because as you have said you have managed to create differences among yourselves.

This plan of reuniting the North with the South really needs a lot of planning and discussion between both parties involved.

I hope that in time it will be resolved.

Anyways, below are the corrections for you to study.

Have a nice day and good luck with your exams. AJA!!!

Teacher Roxy

xoxoxo

I will try tp write and think in english although sentences are weired to read at first. But I will.

>> I will try to write and think in English even if the sentences are hard to understand.

Anyway I gonna try to wirte my opinion about a article that I will read.

>> Anyway, I want to try to write my opinion about an article that I have read.

Today, I read a article about travel in North Korea.

>> Today, I read an article about traveling to North Korea.

In the article, North Korea will allow foreign tourists to traverse the secretive country by rail for the first time. 

>>  In the article, North Korea will allow tourists to traverse the secretive country by rail for the first time. 

But I still don\'t know how would be us who live in South Korea. 

>> But I do not know if it it the same for us who live in South Korea.

As I know, People lived in South Korea can\'t go to travel to North Korea even Mt. Keumgang that we could travel before. 

>> As far as I know, people who live in South Korea cannot travel to North Korea including the Mt. Keumgang which we have traveled to before.

We have a very sad story about division. 

>> CORRECT 

OR >> Our countries division has been very tragic.

But I don\'t think we should be reunited together as soon as possible.  I think noow we are too different to be reunited.

>> But I don\'t think that we should be reunited yet because we have a lot of differences now.    

We have very different lifestyle, economic growth, value of currency and even culture. 

>> CORRECT

OR >> We are very different when it comes to lifestyle, economic growth, currency and culture. 

It is impossible to be reunited as merger like Germany\'s unit.

>> So it is really impossible to be reunited like Germany.

I think We need some time to prepare the unit. 

>> We need time to prepare each other for the merger.

If we are of one mind, we can be reunited together as soon as possible.

>> If we have the same things in mind, maybe we can be reunited again.