I will talk about travel.
학생이 쓴 원문
I will talk about travel.
Nowdays, my favorite tv program is about travel.
For example,
it is "World Theme Travel", "Tears of Amazone" etc.
Because that program is documentary,
They are fact.
I don't like drama.
Because I like fact than fiction more.
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Hi [이름] here are your grammar corrections:
I will talk about travel.
-I want to talk about travelling.Nowdays, my favorite tv program is about travel.
-Nowadays, my favourite TV program is about travellingFor example, "World Theme Travel", "Tears of Amazone" etc.
-CorrectBecause that program is documentary,
-Because these programs are documentaryThey are fact.
-They are facts
-They are trueI don't like drama.
-I don't like watching dramasBecause I like fact than fiction more.
-Because I am towards information and facts
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