I will wait for your call^^~*

2010-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

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Now he is drowsiness and endotracheal intubation. When did he stay there? He was stay last week. Are you working in that hospital for your best friend's father is confined(?)? Yes, I went to visit. So I hope your best friend's father will get batter soon. How is your best friend is doing now? Is she OK? My best friend lives in Singapore but She will come to Korea tonight. DId you work this morning? How was it? Was very busy? We have very bed weather. In the rain is very strong. So we have few patients only. How about in the hospital your working? Did you have many patient today? How many nurses are working your hospital? There are ten nurses for working in the hospital. Do you have a book review? I reviewed the book. Are there what page on now? I will wait for your call.

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Hi,Mi [이름]...Don't worry he will get better anytime soon. You just have to confide your bestfriend for now, since she badly needs your comfort. See you and I'm loking forward to talk with you.   Now he is drowsiness and endotracheal intubation. >>>Now, he feels drowsy and he is in endotracheal intubation.hen did he stay there? >>>For how long did he stay in the hospital? He was stay last week. >>>He was confined last week.Are you working in that hospital for your best friend's father is confined(?)? Yes, I went to visit. >>>Do you work in the hospital where your bestriend's father was confined?So I hope your best friend's father will get batter soon. >>>So, I hope your bestfriend's father wll get better soon.How is your best friend is doing now? Is she OK? >>>correct sentenceMy best friend lives in Singapore but She will come to Korea tonight. >>>correct sentenceDId you work this morning? >>>correct sentence How was it? Was very busy? >>>How was it? Ws it very busy?We have very bed weather. In the rain is very strong. So we have few patients only. How about in the hospital your working? >>>We have a very bad weather today. The rain is very strong. So, we only have few patients for today. How about in the hospital you are working?re are ten nurses for working in the hospital. >>>We are ten nurse working in the hospital.Do you have a book review? I reviewed the book. >>>Do you have the book?I reviewed our book. Are there what page on now? >>>At what page are we now?I will wait for your call. >>>correct sentence

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