I will waiting for the rain or go to the sea.
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can\'t wait for it to rain or I can\'t stand it, I will go to the sea to get water. The sea is full of salt, so if I drink it as it is, maybe I still get thirsty, or if I drink incorrectly, my health may suffer. So, if we take seawater and boil it and make it with distilled water, we can drink it. Also, even without water, there is a humidifier. I don\'t know if I can drink the water that is in it, but if I don\'t know, I have no choice but to drink the water in it.
강사 첨삭
Hello Maria!
I hope there never gets a time when we will be short of drinking water as that would be near the end of the world.
So we have to make sure that all our water sources are clean and ready to use. We also need to conserve it as well as all the other resources around us.
Thanks for sharing this answer. As always, excellent job!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
The sea is full of salt, so if I drink it as it is, maybe I still get thirsty, or if I drink incorrectly, my health may suffer.
>> The sea is full of salt, so if I drink it as it is, maybe I will still get thirsty, or if I drink it incorrectly, my health may suffer.
So, if we take seawater and boil it and make it with distilled water, we can drink it.
>> Correct!
Also, even without water, there is a humidifier.
>> Correct!
I don\'t know if I can drink the water that is in it, but if I don\'t know, I have no choice but to drink the water in it.
>> Correct!
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