I wish...
학생이 쓴 원문
What are your wishes for your country for 2015?
I wish that my country will be a rich.
So, I hope that many people of in my country will help the people of another country.
I hope that many company of in my country will make a lot of their new factory for many young people because many young people need many factory to work.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
How are you? I like your idea on this one. The theme is helping
one another. It is really good to help each other. By doing so, everybody will
succeed.
Have a great day ahead and take care always.
See you! ^^
~~Teacher Kris
I wish that my country will be a rich.
>> I wish that my country would be rich. So, I hope that many people of in my country will help the people of another country.
>> So, I hope that many people in my country will help the people from another country. I hope that many company of in my country will make a lot of their new factory for many young people because many young people need many factory to
>> I hope that many company in my country will establish new factories because a lot of young people need a job.
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