I wish I learn about yoga

2021-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I have never learned about yoga. However, since I have learned pilates, many people have recommended yoga. So, I get to be interested in yoga and I\'d like to learn this someday. According to other\'s comment of this, they say that pilates and yoga are similar, but they also have many different things. Thus, If I can learn something, I want to learn about yoga.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I have never learned about yoga. 

>> CORRECT!

However, since I have learned pilates, many people have recommended yoga. 

>> However, since I have learned about Pilates, many people have recommended yoga. 

So, I get to be interested in yoga and I\'d like to learn this someday. 

>> So I started to gave interest in yoga and I\'d like to learn it someday. 

According to other\'s comment of this, they say that pilates and yoga are similar, but they also have many different things. 

>> According to others\' comments, they say that Pilates and yoga are similar, but they also have many differences. 

Thus, If I can learn something, I want to learn about yoga.

>> Thus, If I can learn something new, I want to learn about yoga.

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