I woke up

2017-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

I woke up at around 5:30 to ready for today's English class. After waking up, I go to toilet first and drink a sip of water. And then I turn my notebook on. And I practice english listening skill with a article which is provided a website. And then I make an english sentence which will be posted to power english. Many time, there is enough time to write full article. So, ....

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for writing another composition for me. Wow! you\'re such an early bird! You\'re on the right track. Listening to English audio helps you to further enhance your ability to understand the spoken English. You were great, keep it up!

~Teacher Eunice


I woke up at around 5:30 to ready for today\'s English class.
>> I woke up at around 5:30 am to get ready for today\'s English class. 

>> I woke up at around 5:30 in the morning to prepare for today\'s English class. 
 After waking up, I go to toilet first and drink a sip of water.
>> After waking up, I went first  to the toilet and then drank a glass of water in the kitchen.
And then I turn my notebook on.
>> I immediately turned on my notebook after that.
And I practice english listening skill with a article which is provided a website.
>> I practiced my listening skill with an article which is provided on the website. 

OR

>> I listened to an article on the website to further enhance my listening skill.
 And then I make an english sentence which will be posted to power english.
>> I also wrote a composition which will be posted on the Power English website.
Many time, there is enough time to write full article.
>> I have enough time to write an article every day.
So, ....

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