I Wold Rather Choose Me
학생이 쓴 원문
I always pretended as meaningless person to my self.
That\'s one of the smallest reason why I decided to use my meaningless life for other precious lives.
However, I realized that one of the main reason why I pretend like that was because I wanted some specific person to know the fact that I need help.
Although that person didn\'t realize that, I realized my meaninglessness was just a performance.
I have a lot of choices in \'most precious person\', but I would rather choose me for now. I lived for me until now.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]. It was a pleasure hearing from you again. Here are the corrections to your previous homework.
I always pretended as meaningless person to my self.
>> I always pretended to be a meaningless person to myself.
That\'s one of the smallest reason why I decided to use my meaningless life for other precious lives.
>> That\'s one of the smallest reasons why I decided to use my meaningless life for other precious lives.
However, I realized that one of the main reason why I pretend like that was because I wanted some specific person to know the fact that I need help.
>> However, I realized that one of the main reasons why I pretended that way was because I wanted some specific person to know the fact that I need help.
Although that person didn\'t realize that, I realized my meaninglessness was just a performance.
>> CORRECT =)
I have a lot of choices in \'most precious person\', but I would rather choose me for now.
>> I have a lot of choices among the most precious people, but I would rather choose \"me\" for now.
I lived for me until now.
>> I have lived for me until now.
I always pretended as meaningless person to my self.
>> I always pretended to be a meaningless person to myself.
That\'s one of the smallest reason why I decided to use my meaningless life for other precious lives.
>> That\'s one of the smallest reasons why I decided to use my meaningless life for other precious lives.
However, I realized that one of the main reason why I pretend like that was because I wanted some specific person to know the fact that I need help.
>> However, I realized that one of the main reasons why I pretended that way was because I wanted some specific person to know the fact that I need help.
Although that person didn\'t realize that, I realized my meaninglessness was just a performance.
>> CORRECT =)
I have a lot of choices in \'most precious person\', but I would rather choose me for now.
>> I have a lot of choices among the most precious people, but I would rather choose \"me\" for now.
I lived for me until now.
>> I have lived for me until now.
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