I won’t receive your calling.

2019-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Andi

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name]. Hello. I’m [이름]. I just heard that I have to attend the meeting at 1:30 pm from my boss. My feeling is bad..... So I won’t receive your call. You can do not call to me. I’m sorry, Andi. We can calling tomorrow. See you tomorrow. Bye. ^^

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름],

Oh! I am so sad too. Anyway, we will get to talk to each tomorrow. Just enjoy your meeting today. And I am so sorry, I still have to call you today even though you aren’t going to answer. It would have been better if you have put the class On Hold. Anyway, have a nice day ahead [이름]. Ciao!

Teacher Andi =)

 

Dear [Name].

>> Dear [Name],
Hello.

>> Correct. Hello to you too my dear. =)
I’m [이름].

>> Bingo! Hello [이름]. ^_^
I just heard that I have to attend the meeting at 1:30 pm from my boss.

>> Correct! It’s grammatically free error.
My feeling is bad.....

>> I feel bad.
So I won’t receive your call.

>> So, I won’t receive your call.
You can do not call to me.

>> Can you not call me? (I am so sorry [이름], I still have to call you. You can put your phone in silent mode so, you won’t be disturbed.)
I’m sorry, Andi.

>> Correct! I am sorry too. I look forward to talking with you.
We can calling tomorrow.

>> We can call each other tomorrow.

>> or: We can talk with each other tomorrow.
See you tomorrow. Bye. ^^

>> Correct! See you tomorrow too. =)

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