I wonder if you spend your time on politics.
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Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on politics. It\'s perfectly fine to find politics uninteresting. I agree that different opinions can lead to conflicts, and it\'s wise to know when to step back from those discussions. Your English is getting better, but I suggest that you should try to incorporate more details that support your ideas and give your readers a clearer picture of your perspective. Additionally, using a variety of sentence structures can make your writing more engaging and enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing more of your writing!
~Teacher Cathy
Politics is not very interesting to me.
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OR>>I\'m not very interested in politics.
Of course, I\'m looking into important things (ex: issues of the president or lawmakers who set important national documents), but I don\'t like any kind of politics and I don\'t want to discuss it or anything.
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OR>>I pay attention to important matters, like the president\'s issues or laws that affect the country, but I don\'t like politics and don’t want to talk about it.
This is because politics can cause problems because each individual\'s thoughts are so different.
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OR>>This is because politics can create problems since everyone thinks differently.
So when I see people like that, I avoid them.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Therefore, I tend to steer clear of people like that.
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