I wonder when this coronavirus crisis will completely over.
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I wonder when this coronavirus crisis will completely over.
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Hello [이름],
There were some mistakes but don\'t let those mistakes conquer your strength.
I hope that you will still continue to develop this way.
You can learn from this process.
^.^ Just keep it up!!
T. Jeny
Of course, I am sure of myself it\'s not the right time to have relief on the coronavirus crisis but there are somewhat good clues that says we\'ve been slowly but surely handling things here in Korea. >>Of course, I am sure of myself it\'s not the right time to be complacent about the coronavirus crisis but there are somewhat good clues that say we\'ve been slowly but surely handling things here in Korea. The number of the confirmed cases has become less and less to the point of 10 cases or so everyday. >>The number of confirmed cases has become lesser and lesser to the point of 10 cases per day. It\'s on a quite positive way and if we can keep it that way, we can get things back to normal in everything as quick as we expected. >>It\'s in a quite positive way, if we can keep it that way, we can get everything back to normal as quickly as expected. But a couple of day ago, there was the bad news: an infected man in Busan went to a club, breaking ‘social-distancing’ and \'self-isolation\', meaning keeping somewhat from others and the restriction against traveling itself. >>But a couple of days ago, there was bad news: an infected man in Busan went to a club, breaking ‘social-distancing’ and \'self-isolation,\' meaning keeping away from others and travel restriction were violated. I partly understand why he wanted to go and eventually went to the club because he hadn\'t had any symptoms before. >>correct But I can\'t understand why those like him try to visit such a busy place by breaking or ignoring the rules that prevent from making the crisis last longer and get more serious. >>But I can\'t understand why those like him try to visit such a busy place by breaking or ignoring the rules preventing from creating the crisis last longer and causing a more serious problem. I think they should have been at least wearing masks. >>correct It seems to me that the punishment looks so mild that the punishment itself can hardly control their behaviors >>It seems to me that the punishment looks so mild that the punishment itself can hardly control their behavior. I mean that the punishment should become a lot harsher than it really is now. >>I mean that the punishments should be a lot harsher than it is. And we need to make their behaviors under assault. >>And we need to make their behavior under assault. If we can\'t go that far, we need to at least build up positive peer pressure that prods those breaking or ignore the curbs to practice ‘social-distancing’ and ‘self-isolation or self-quarantine’. >>If we can\'t go that far, we need to at least build up a positive peer pressure that prods those breaking or ignoring the curbs to practice ‘social-distancing,’ and ‘self-isolation or self-quarantine.’ We should keep it in mind that the people who are striving for the end of this crisis are not us but health care workers. >>We should keep in mind that the people who are striving for the end of this crisis are not us but the health care workers. Don’t irritate them if you won’t want to help them get rid of the coronavirus. >>Don’t let them get irritated if you don’t want to help them get rid of coronavirus. If you keep selfish yourself, we are supposed to give it way more efforts and we have very little success. >>If we keep on being selfish, we will take away more effort and we won\'t succeed. I wonder when this coronavirus crisis will completely over.
>>I wonder when this coronavirus crisis will be completely over.
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