I worried about too many things.

2010-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 ali

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Hi, Ali! I think you are so bright and energetic. I don't know about Philippines well, but I can feel very comfortable with you.. And I wonder how you look like sometimes.. I worry about too many things in these days. 'What am I going to do next year?' -_-;; 'How can I lose my weight?' ㅜ.ㅜ;; 'How can I bring up my kids well?' 'How can I increase saving money?' like that.. I know that too much worry is not helpful to solve the problems. However, I can't sleep well spending time to worry about that things. How about you? Are you happy in most of time? I just wonder... Have a nice day and let's talk again tomorrow~

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]! How's your day going? I hope you just take it easy, you can do things one step at a time. Worry is good, because it will make you plan ahead. But don't worry too much - it will make your head spin literally, and it will have a great impact on your health for the most part. Ha ha.  I worry about a lot of things too, stress is just but a part of everyone else's life, but I am confident that if I do my best, I can achieve my goals in time. I am thankful that I get a lot of support from people I care about. I am sure that you and your family will do well because of such concern, so try to think about yourself too, okay! Take care of yourself! See you in class tomorrow! =)   Hi, Ali! >>> CorrectI think you are so bright and energetic. >>> Correct I don't know about Philippines well, but I can feel very comfortable with you.. >>> Correct >>> OR: I don't know much about the Philippines?  And I wonder how you look like sometimes.. >>> Correct (I wonder how you look, too!)I worry about too many things in these days. >>> I worry about too many things these days.'What am I going to do next year? >>> Correct'How can I lose my weight? >>> Correct =)'How can I bring up my kids well?' >>> Correct'How can I increase saving money?' >>> Correct >>>OR: How can I increase my savings? like that.. >>>Correct >>>OR: Stuff like that.I know that too much worry is not helpful to solve the problems. >>> CorrectHowever, I can't sleep well spending time to worry about that things. >>> However, I can't sleep well spending time to worry about those things. How about you? Are you happy in most of time? >>> .. Are you happy most of the time?I just wonder... >>> CorrectHave a nice day and let's talk again tomorrow~ Correct

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