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I would like to include yoga or pilates in my ideal fitness program. I think my body will look pretty. And yoga and Pilates seem to help calm the mind and body.
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I would like to include yoga or pilates in my ideal fitness program.
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I think my body will look pretty. And yoga and Pilates seem to help calm the mind and body.
>> I think my body will look good and these two seem to help me calm my mind and body.
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I think my body will look pretty. And yoga and Pilates seem to help calm the mind and body.
>> I think my body will look good and these two seem to help me calm my mind and body.
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