I would appreciate it if you could check the sentence below.
학생이 쓴 원문
Without any dreams , [이름]ce human beings are inherently pure , you can\'t commit [이름]s even if you want to commit [이름]s, and without any dreams, [이름]ce ‘self-nature’* is free of disease, you can\'t get sick even if you want to get sick, and without any dreams , human beings cannot perish, because they are originally eternal.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, [이름] [이름]! ^^
Good job on this composition, there were no errors found in your sentence. ^^
Keep it up!
Good job on this composition, there were no errors found in your sentence. ^^
Keep it up!
- T. Rina
1. Without any dreams , [이름]ce human beings are inherently pure , you can\'t commit [이름]s even if you want to commit [이름]s, and without any dreams, [이름]ce ‘self-nature’* is free of disease, you can\'t get sick even if you want to get sick, and without any dreams , human beings cannot perish, because they are originally eternal.
>> CORRECT!
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