I would appreciate it if you could check the sentence below.
학생이 쓴 원문
Inside God\'s heart, my elder daughter\'s destined spouse
exists.
In daughter\'s deep and deep awareness, she knows where the destined spouse is.
My daughter\'s destined spouse must appear from somewhere, come closer to each other, and a bond is bound to be formed in harmony and in bles[이름]g.
O God, thank you in advance for granting her destined spouse and leading her to happy marriage.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름] [이름]! ^^
Thank you so much for this.
Thank you so much for this.
See you in class! ^^
- T. Rina
1. Inside God\'s heart, my elder daughter\'s destined spouse exists.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
2. In daughter\'s deep and deep awareness, she knows where the destined spouse is.
>> In daughter\'s deep awareness, she knows where the destined spouse is.
>> In daughter\'s deep awareness, she knows where the destined spouse is.
3. My daughter\'s destined spouse must appear from somewhere, come closer to each other, and a bond is bound to be formed in harmony and in bles[이름]g.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
4. O God, thank you in advance for granting her destined spouse and leading her to happy marriage.
>> Oh God, thank you in advance for granting her destined spouse and leading her to a happy marriage.
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