I would appreciate it if you could check the sentence below.
학생이 쓴 원문
[a song to greet the Holy Creator]
The Holy Creator who gives life to all beings, come here and be filled.
My life is not my strength, but it is the life of the Holy Creator who is consistent in heaven and earth.
What I do is not what I do, but the power of the Holy Creator who is consistent in heaven and earth.
The Holy Creator of the House of Saints, who came down to spread the truth among heaven and earth, protect me.
강사 첨삭
Wonderful Wednesday, [이름] [이름]~ ^^
Thank you for this.
Have a good day and see you in class! ^^
- T. Rina
1. The Holy Creator who gives life to all beings, come here and be filled.
>> CORRECT!
2. My life is not my strength, but it is the life of the Holy Creator who is consistent in heaven and earth.
2. My life is not my strength, but it is the life of the Holy Creator who is consistent in heaven and earth.
>> CORRECT!
3. What I do is not what I do, but the power of the Holy Creator who is consistent in heaven and earth.
3. What I do is not what I do, but the power of the Holy Creator who is consistent in heaven and earth.
>> CORRECT!
4. The Holy Creator of the House of Saints, who came down to spread the truth among heaven and earth, protect me.
4. The Holy Creator of the House of Saints, who came down to spread the truth among heaven and earth, protect me.
>> CORRECT!
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