I would appreciate it if you could check the sentence below.
학생이 쓴 원문
The kingdom of this world is but a shadow.
The always non-hard, pleasurable state exists only in your inward, and only when one is inwardly aware of the always non-hard, pleasurable state, the always non-hard, pleasurable state will appear as a phenomenon in accordance with its reflection.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름] [이름]~
Thank you for all your compositions this week.
Have a good weekend!
- T. Rina
1. The kingdom of this world is but a shadow.
>> CORRECT!
2. The always non-hard, pleasurable state exists only in your inward, and only when one is inwardly aware of the always non-hard, pleasurable state, the always non-hard, pleasurable state will appear as a phenomenon in accordance with its reflection.
>> The always non-hard, pleasurable state exists only inward, and only when one is inwardly aware of the always non-hard, pleasurable state, the always non-hard, pleasurable state will appear as a phenomenon in accordance with its reflection.
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