I would be appreciated if you review the below sentence.
학생이 쓴 원문
The reason why you get better by realizing the truth after reading 『The Reality* of Life』 is because the foresaid first dream was broken.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름] [이름]! :)
Thank you for this composition. I hope you are referring to the book The Reality of Life. :)
Have a good day! :)
- T. Rina
1. I would be appreciated if you review the below sentence.
>> I would appreciate it if you could check the sentence below.
OR: It would be appreciated if you could check the sentence below.
2. The reason why you get better by realizing the truth after reading The Reality of Life is because the foresaid first dream was broken.
>> The reason why you get better by realizing the truth after reading the book The Reality of Life, is because the first dream didn\'t come true.
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