I would be appreciated if you review the below sentence.
학생이 쓴 원문
If this first dream is broken, the root cause of [이름], sickness, and death will be destroyed, and return to the original nothingness.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름] [이름]! :)
Thank you for these sentences. You did great! :)
- T. Rina
1. I would be appreciated if you review the below sentence.
>> I would appreciate it if you could check the sentence below.
OR: It would be appreciated if you could check the sentence below.
2. If this first dream is broken, the root cause of [이름], sickness, and death will be destroyed, and return to the original nothingness.
>> If this first dream didn\'t come true, the root cause of [이름], sickness, and death will be destroyed, and it\'ll return to the original nothingness.
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