I would be appreciated if you review the below sentence.
학생이 쓴 원문
Modern science that human beings are made of substance in modern times, which is the first dream that leads human beings into the delusions* of [이름], sickness and death.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름] [이름]! :)
Here is the third part.
See you in class! :)
- T. Rina
1. I would be appreciated if you review the below sentence.
>> I would appreciate it if you could check the sentence below.
OR: It would be appreciated if you could check the sentence below.
2. Modern science that human beings are made of substance in modern times, which is the first dream that leads human beings into the delusions* of [이름], sickness and death.
>> Modern Science states that human beings are made of substance during the modern times, which is the first dream that leads us into the delusions of [이름], sickness, and death.
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