I would go first to people of my own gender.
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I would go first to people of my own gender.
>>Correct!
I am not good at conversation to first meeting person.
>>I am not good at starting a conversation when I first meet a person.
When I talk my own gender, I feel more comfortable than other gender.
>>When I talk to people with my own gender, I feel more comfortable than other genders.
But no matter how same is own gender, I feel difficult the person with a big age difference.
>>But no matter how the same our gender is, I still feel uncomfortable communicating with the person who has a big age difference with me.
so both are important to me.
>>So both are important to me.
I envy person who doesn\'t matter both of them.
>>I envy people who don\'t have problems on both of them.
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