I would like to change my name to...

2014-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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As you know my Korean name is quite different from most of Korean. Most of Korean have olny Three-lettered-name, but I have four letter. So I was target of my friend when I was young, they pick me up with my name. At that time I disliked my name but As I grow up, I realized that my name has a very beautiful meaning. Additionally I feel that I'm the specail one. because everyone who I met before don't forget my name. Now I really love my name, so I don't want to change my Korean name. but If there is chance to change my English name, I would like to change [이름] to Smith which you can also find in Matrix. Smith is evil charater but I thought smith is good. When I heard the word, It makes me think up some kind of kindness and politeness. It seems gentle and tidy. I think It is suitable for me. Most of French name is quite soft, in that case, I'd like to change to Gorgon Whatever,,,, kk

강사 첨삭

[이름]!

I am so thankful that you are doing a lot of compositions tonight.

So how should I call you? Hihihihi. You gave me a lot of names.

If you are going to ask me, I prefer [이름] because for me it means strong and wise.

Let us talk more about this in class.

Teacher Nina


As you know my Korean name is quite different from most of Korean.

>> As you know, my Korean name is quite different from most Koreans.
Most of Korean have olny Three-lettered-name, but I have four letter.

>> Most Koreans have only three lettered name but I have four.
So I was target of my friend when I was young, they pick me up with my name.

>> So I was teased by my friends when I was young, they pick me using my name.
At that time I disliked my name but As I grow up, I realized that my name has a very beautiful meaning.

>> Correct

>> OR: At that time, I disliked my name but as I grew older, I realized that my name has a beautiful meaning.

Additionally I feel that I\'m the specail one.

>> In addition, I feel that I am special.
because everyone who I met before don\'t forget my name. 

>> Because everyone that I met, didn\'t forget my name.
Now I really love my name, so I don\'t want to change my Korean name.

>> correct

but If there is chance to change my English name, I would like to change [이름] to Smith which you can also find in Matrix.

>> correct 
Smith is evil charater but I thought smith is good.

>> Smith is an evil character but I think he is good.
When I heard the word, It makes me think up some kind of kindness and politeness.

>> When I heard that word, it made me think of kindness and politeness.
It seems gentle and tidy. I think It is suitable for me.

>> correct 
Most of French name is quite soft, in that case, I\'d like to change to Gorgon

>> Most French names is quite soft, in that case, I like to change it to Gorgon.
Whatever,,,, kk

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