I would like to keep our tradition house in jeju
학생이 쓴 원문
here in jeju have a tradition house which is made by our ancestor who lived in jeju island
when they made house long time ago, they used a stone that magma changed to stone
so the house have a good insulation and they could stop the cool wind in winter season
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your homework.
I actually searched this house that you mentioned and it was amazing!
I think your ancestors were really awesome when they made this considering the seasonal changes in your country. ^^
~Teacher Gina
I would like to keep our tradition house in jeju.
>> I would like to keep our traditional house in Jeju.
here in jeju have a tradition house which is made by our ancestor who lived in jeju island>> Here in Jeju, we have a traditional house which was made by our ancestor who lived here.
when they made house long time ago, they used a stone that magma changed to stone
when they made house long time ago, they used a stone that magma changed to stone
>> When they made a house a long time ago, they used a stone from the hardened magma.
so the house have a good insulation and they could stop the cool wind in winter season
so the house have a good insulation and they could stop the cool wind in winter season
>> So the house has a good insulation and they could stop the cool wind in the winter season.
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