I would probably like to take a selfie with my family or my boyfriend.

2023-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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Selfie refers to the act of taking a picture of yourself using a tool to take a picture. I would probably like to take a selfie with my family or my boyfriend. Because they are the people who are the most precious to me and make me happy when I am next to them.

강사 첨삭

Hi Da [이름], 

Your thoughts on selfies are wonderful! I completely understand why you\'d want to capture those special moments with your family and boyfriend - they bring so much joy and happiness. Keep cherishing those precious moments .

~Teacher Cathy 

 

Selfie refers to the act of taking a picture of yourself using a tool to take a picture. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Selfie refers to the act of taking a picture of yourself using a tool to capture the image. 

I would probably like to take a selfie with my family or my boyfriend. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I would likely take a selfie with my boyfriend or family. 

Because they are the people who are the most precious to me and make me happy when I am next to them. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>> They are the people who are most precious to me and make me happy when I am next to them. 

 

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