I would rather be intelligent than good-looking.
학생이 쓴 원문
Applicants must be responsible, intelligent and punctual.
I want to working.
Now I am resting home.
I was watching T.V. home and go outside immediately after.
The movie theater is interesting place for us especially.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]. Nice work!Keep making good progress by practicing your English skills.
Applicants must be responsible, intelligent and punctual.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>> You must be responsible, intelligent and punctual when applying for a job.
I want to working.
>>>I want to work.
Now I am resting home.
Now I am resting home.
>>> Now, I am just resting at home.
I was watching T.V. home and go outside immediately after.
I was watching T.V. home and go outside immediately after.
>>>I was watching TV at home then went outside immediately after that.
The movie theater is interesting place for us especially.
The movie theater is interesting place for us especially.
>>> The movie theater is an interesting place for us especially.
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