I would rather live in a big city.
학생이 쓴 원문
I live in an apartment.
I live well in my home.
And tomorrow morning I will go to deliver products for money and my health.
Practice makes a success.
Big city has a lot of things for us.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]. Thank you for your effort. Continue doing your homework to improve your English skills.
And tomorrow morning I will go to deliver products for money and my health.
>>>And tomorrow morning, I will deliver products to earn money for my health.
Practice makes a success.
>>>Practice makes success.
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