I would rather live in a tree house
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I would rather live in a tree house. It is because I want to live in a bright place. I think if I can’t get a sunlight, it would be like living at the hell and I heard that living in the underground is unhealthy for the body. I feel like living in a tree house is very fantasy and it would be amazing that I’m in the nature getting lots of fresh air and listening to bird’s song.
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T. DON
I would rather live in a tree house. It is because I want to live in a
bright place. I think if I can’t get a sunlight, it would be like living
at the hell and I heard that living in the underground is unhealthy
for the body. I feel like living in a tree house is very fantasy and it
would be amazing that I’m in the nature getting lots of fresh air and
listening to bird’s song.
>> I would rather live in a tree house. It is because I want to live in a
bright place. I think if I can’t get a sunlight, it would be like living in hell and I heard that living underground is unhealthy
for the body. I feel like living in a tree house is like a fantasy and it
would be amazing that I’m with nature getting fresh air and
listening to the bird’s song.
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