I wouldn\'t want it.
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Hi Da [이름],
Your reflection on the idea of not wanting your child to grow up is heartfelt. The sentiment of wanting to remain a supportive friend to your child as they age is touching. Your consideration of the potential indebtedness as you grow older adds a thoughtful layer to your perspective.
Parenting is indeed a complex journey with various emotions and considerations. Your honesty and contemplation on these aspects shine through in your words.
~Teacher Cathy
I don\'t know because I\'m not a parent, but if I were a parent, I wish my child hadn\'t grown up.
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OR>>I don\'t know because I\'m not a parent, but if I were, I would wish that my child hadn\'t grown up.
As my child grows older, I will grow older, but I want to be supportive of him and be his friend.
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OR>>As my child grows older, I will also age, but I want to be supportive and a friend to him.
But when I get older, I can be indebted to my child later.
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OR>>But as I get older, I may become indebted to my child in the future.
So I wouldn\'t want it.
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OR>>That\'s why I don\'t want it.
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