I wouldn\'t want it.

2024-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

I don\'t know because I\'m not a parent, but if I were a parent, I wish my child hadn\'t grown up. As my child grows older, I will grow older, but I want to be supportive of him and be his friend. But when I get older, I can be indebted to my child later. So I wouldn\'t want it.

강사 첨삭

Hi Da [이름], 

Your reflection on the idea of not wanting your child to grow up is heartfelt. The sentiment of wanting to remain a supportive friend to your child as they age is touching. Your consideration of the potential indebtedness as you grow older adds a thoughtful layer to your perspective. 

Parenting is indeed a complex journey with various emotions and considerations. Your honesty and contemplation on these aspects shine through in your words. 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

I don\'t know because I\'m not a parent, but if I were a parent, I wish my child hadn\'t grown up. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I don\'t know because I\'m not a parent, but if I were, I would wish that my child hadn\'t grown up. 

As my child grows older, I will grow older, but I want to be supportive of him and be his friend. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>As my child grows older, I will also age, but I want to be supportive and a friend to him. 

But when I get older, I can be indebted to my child later. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>But as I get older, I may become indebted to my child in the future. 

So I wouldn\'t want it. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>That\'s why I don\'t want it. 

 

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