i wrote Email to my friend who lives other country

2011-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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Hi jane, I just wrote Email to friend. Could you check it for me? ---------------------------------------- I just checked your Email. I was back to my office from vacation. Recently Korea has very hot and big rainy season. River overflows, it’s a very damp weather. It’ll last until end of August. Did you still remember the snow iced room in the Genting highland? ^^ I am studying IPhone application, (object C-programming language) now. I’ll make a smart mobile software company in someday. How is your recent life? There is a one other thing. You know what a surprised~!! My baby was born on April. ^^;; My baby name is Ethan. [Chung Ethan] The meaning of pronounce is “be loved with someone” in Korean word.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], I hope the corrections help J I hope you had a blast during your vacation. -Techer Jane-   Hi jane, >>Hi Jane, I just wrote Email to friend. >>I just wrote an Email to my friend. Could you check it for me? >>CorrectI just checked your Email. >>CorrectI was back to my office from vacation. >>CorrectRecently Korea has very hot and big rainy season. >> Recently, Korea's weather has been very hot but it is supposed to be the rainy season.River overflows, it’s a very damp weather. >> The river overflows whenever we have a very damp weather. It’ll last until end of August. >> I think it will last until the end of August. Did you still remember the snow iced room in the Genting highland? ^^>> Do you still remember the snow iced room in the Genting highland? ^^I am studying IPhone application, (object C-programming language) now. >> I am studying an IPhone application which is called object C-programming language.I’ll make a smart mobile software company in someday. >>Someday, I'll make a smart mobile software company.How is your recent life?>>CorrectThere is a one other thing. >>There is another thing. You know what a surprised~!! >>I was surprised! My baby was born on April. ^^;; >>CorrectMy baby name is Ethan. [Chung Ethan] >> My baby's name is Ethan. [Chung Ethan]The meaning of pronounce is “be loved with someone” in Korean word. >> My baby's name means be loved with someone in Korean.  

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