i wrote Email to my friend who lives other country
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi jane,
I just wrote Email to friend.
Could you check it for me?
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I just checked your Email.
I was back to my office from vacation.
Recently Korea has very hot and big rainy season.
River overflows, it’s a very damp weather.
It’ll last until end of August. Did you still remember the snow iced room in the Genting highland? ^^
I am studying IPhone application, (object C-programming language) now.
I’ll make a smart mobile software company in someday.
How is your recent life?
There is a one other thing.
You know what a surprised~!!
My baby was born on April. ^^;;
My baby name is Ethan. [Chung Ethan]
The meaning of pronounce is “be loved with someone” in Korean word.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
I hope the corrections help J I hope you had a blast during your vacation.
-Techer Jane-
Hi jane,
>>Hi Jane, I just wrote Email to friend.
>>I just wrote an Email to my friend. Could you check it for me?
>>CorrectI just checked your Email.
>>CorrectI was back to my office from vacation.
>>CorrectRecently Korea has very hot and big rainy season.
>> Recently, Korea's weather has been very hot but it is supposed to be the rainy season.River overflows, it’s a very damp weather.
>> The river overflows whenever we have a very damp weather. It’ll last until end of August.
>> I think it will last until the end of August.
Did you still remember the snow iced room in the Genting highland? ^^>> Do you still remember the snow iced room in the Genting highland? ^^I am studying IPhone application, (object C-programming language) now.
>> I am studying an IPhone application which is called object C-programming language.I’ll make a smart mobile software company in someday.
>>Someday, I'll make a smart mobile software company.How is your recent life?>>CorrectThere is a one other thing.
>>There is another thing. You know what a surprised~!!
>>I was surprised! My baby was born on April. ^^;;
>>CorrectMy baby name is Ethan. [Chung Ethan]
>> My baby's name is Ethan. [Chung Ethan]The meaning of pronounce is “be loved with someone” in Korean word.
>> My baby's name means be loved with someone in Korean.
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