Ice cream
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to eat I ce cream because they are delicious and cold. It is really nice to eat ice cream at summer because it is really hot and sticky. my sister and mum likes to eat ice cream. Ice cream has lots of cafein so mum sais don't eat to uch ice cream because you cannot sleep. I always remeber that.
Do you like ice cream? What flavour, Teacher Mayleen?
강사 첨삭
Hi Min!
Happy Friday!
Yes, I like to eat ice cream too. My like flavors with chocolate in it like rocky road, double dutch, and mint chocolate. I don\'t like fruit flavors that much unless there\'s real fruit included.:) My sister knows hot to make ice cream.^_^
How about you, what flavor do you like the best, Min?
Many flavors of ice cream like strawberry, caramel, and peanut butter are free from caffeine.
Flavors including chocolate and tea have caffeine. For children, you should limit your consumption to 100 milligrams only so it won\'t impact or affect your sleep.
See you in class.^_-
=T. Mayleen=
I like to eat I ce cream because they are delicious and cold.
>> I like to eat ice cream because it\'s delicious and cold.
It is really nice to eat ice cream at summer because it is really hot and sticky.
>> It is really nice to eat ice cream during summer since it\'s hot.
my sister and mum likes to eat ice cream.
>> My siter and mom like to eat ice cream too.
Ice cream has lots of cafein so mum sais don\'t eat to uch ice cream because you cannot sleep.
>> Ice cream contains caffeine so mom said don\'t eat ice cream at night because you won\'t be able to sleep.
I always remeber that.
>> I always keep that in mind.
Do you like ice cream?
>> Do you like ice cream too?
What flavour, Teacher Mayleen?
>> What flavor is your favorite, Teacher Mayleen?
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