Ice cream

2016-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

Most of the kids likes Ice cream. Do you like ice cream too,Teacher Mayleen? There are lots of flavours in ice cream like strawberry flavour,chocolate flavour,banila flavour and lots of other flavours. And now for a ice cream joke:I scream!You scream!We all scream for ice cream! Isn't it funny joke!

강사 첨삭

Hi MIN!^^

Happy Friday!

I scream! You scream! Give me that, give me that ice scream!

This is a song by Red Velvet.^_^

Well, teacher likes ice cream very much. My favorite flavors are rocky road and double dutch. But now I have to avoid eating cold and sweet food because of tonsillitis.:(

You should control yourself, too, okay? And don\'t forget to brush your teeth.

I\'ll see you in class.

~T. Mayleen~

Most of the kids likes Ice cream.

>> Most kids like ice cream.
Do you like ice cream too,Teacher Mayleen?

>> CORRECT
There are lots of flavours in ice cream like strawberry flavour,chocolate flavour,banila flavour and lots of other flavours.

>> There are lots of flavors of ice cream like strawberry, chocolate, vanilla, and so on.
And now for a ice cream joke:I scream!You scream!We all scream for ice cream!

>> And now for ice cream joke: I scream! You scream! We all scream for ice cream!
Isn\'t it funny joke!

>> Isn\'t it a funny joke?

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