Ice-cream's homework

2017-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lorna

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HOMEWORK: Directions: Use the following words in a complete sentence. 1. animals:Wean i go to the zoo i can see animals 2. fairies:? 3. travel:at saterday i will travel to Daemyung Condo 4. restaurant:i like to go to the restaurant 5. hotel:I will go to the hotel at saterday 6. waterpark:And i will go to the waterpark at saterday

강사 첨삭

Hello there, my Princess Violet!!:)
Thank you in doing your homework.
Keep up the good job!!^-^
I will see you tomorrow.

~ T. Lorna^-^

1. animals:Wean i go to the zoo i can see animals
>> When I go to the zoo, I can see animals.
OR:
>> I can see animals when I go to the zoo.
2. fairies:? 
>> I have many fairies. 
3. travel:at saterday i will travel to Daemyung Condo
>> I will travel to Daemyong Condo this Saturday.
4. restaurant:i like to go to the restaurant
>> I like to go to the restaurant.
5. hotel:I will go to the hotel at saterday
>> I will go to a hotel this Saturday.
6. waterpark:And i will go to the waterpark at saterday
>> I will go to the water park on Saturday.

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