Ice-cream's homework hehe

2018-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Give me two reasons why you like modern days. Answer in complete sentences:1.I can go to the mall. 2.I can see the computer.

강사 첨삭

Hi Violet,


Thanks for doing your homework. ^^


ACTIVITY:


Give me two reasons why you like modern days. Answer in complete sentences.


YOUR ANSWER:


1. I can go to the mall.


2. I can see the computer.


CORRECTIONS:


**There are no corrections in your homework, however I added some options for you.


1. I can go to the mall.

>>> CORRECT

OR: On this modern days, there are malls that we can go to and buy things from.


2. I can see the computer.

>>> CORRECT

OR: I can use computer and it helps me with a lot of things.


That\'s all about the homework, Violet. Please take note of the options I gave you. :)  

Have a good rest. ^^ See you tomorrow.


T. Alexia


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