Ice-cream's homework hehe
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Hi Violet,
Thanks for doing your homework. ^^
ACTIVITY:
Give me two reasons why you like modern days. Answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
1. I can go to the mall.
2. I can see the computer.
CORRECTIONS:
**There are no corrections in your homework, however I added some options for you.
1. I can go to the mall.
>>> CORRECT
OR: On this modern days, there are malls that we can go to and buy things from.
2. I can see the computer.
>>> CORRECT
OR: I can use computer and it helps me with a lot of things.
That\'s all about the homework, Violet. Please take note of the options I gave you. :)
Have a good rest. ^^ See you tomorrow.
T. Alexia
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