Ice-cream's homework hehe
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY
Write something about your adventure to Vietnam. ^^ Write in complete sentences:first,the food(!)was yummy+0+cocobay food........hotel food...........................hahaha and art!!!!!!!!!mart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! everything was good
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Hi Violet,
Thanks for doing your homework. :)
QUESTION: Write something about your adventure in Vietnam. ^^ Write in complete sentences
YOUR ANSWER: first,the food(!)was yummy+0+cocobay food........hotel food...........................hahaha and art!!!!!!!!!mart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! everything was good
CORRECTIONS: First, the food! They were yummy. Cocobay food, hotel food, hahaha! I also like their art and mart. Everything was good.
That\'s all about your homework, Violet. ^^ You need to put a spacing in between words. Grammar was also corrected.
Thank you. ^^
T. Alexia
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