idea of death
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when I think of a death, I felt frightened
I think it\'ll be okay if only my body die. However, I can\'t think that my soul also die, so how long would my soul still alive as the world and the earth continuingly exist? whenever this idea come across my mind, I feel really scared. The one fortunate thing is I can control my mind to do not go far away beyond my limit. If I could not control my thought, the terrible idea occur everytime, so I might be really really hard to endure.
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when I think of a death, I felt frightened
>> Thinking of death makes me feel frightened.
>> Thinking of death makes me feel frightened.
I think it\'ll be okay if only my body die.
>> I think it\'s okay to think that my body will die.
However, I can\'t think that my soul also die, so how long would my soul still alive as the world and the earth continuingly exist?
>> However, I can\'t think of my soul dying as well. So, is my soul going to stay alive as the world and while the Earth still exists?
whenever this idea come across my mind, I feel really scared.
>> Whenever this idea crosses my mind, I feel terrified.
The one fortunate thing is I can control my mind to do not go far away beyond my limit.
>> The only fortunate thing is I can control my mind not to go further.
>> OR: The only fortunate thing is I can control my mind not to go beyond my limits.
If I could not control my thought, the terrible idea occur everytime, so I might be really really hard to endure.
>> If i couldn\'t control my thought, the terrible idea will occur every time. So, I will probably be really hard to bear.
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