Ideal characteristics
학생이 쓴 원문
The ideal characteristic traits of the spouse include being responsible, independent, and open minded. On top of that, it is excellent for my spouse not to be temperament. Actually I was sometimes getting upset whenever my husband lost his temper. I understand most men have a little hot temper. But that trait makes any discussions hard, so makes some conversations impossible. My husband tried not to be temperament and he is not now.
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Good morning, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for completing your homework!
I agree with you, those traits are important in relationship. :)
I agree with you, those traits are important in relationship. :)
See you tomorrow!
-T.Jhozel
The ideal characteristic traits of the spouse include being responsible, independent, and open minded.
>> Correct!
OR: The ideal characteristics of a spouse include responsibility, independence, and open-mindedness.
OR: The ideal characteristics of a spouse include responsibility, independence, and open-mindedness.
On top of that, it is excellent for my spouse not to be temperament.
>> Furthermore, it is advantageous for my spouse to be temperamental.
Actually I was sometimes getting upset whenever my husband lost his temper.
>> Correct!
OR: Actually, I was getting irritated whenever my husband lost his composure.
OR: Actually, I was getting irritated whenever my husband lost his composure.
I understand most men have a little hot temper.
>> Correct!
But that trait makes any discussions hard, so makes some conversations impossible.
>> However, because that trait makes any discussion difficult, it makes some conversations impossible to resolve.
My husband tried not to be temperament and he is not now.
>> My husband made an effort not to be temperamental, and he is no longer.
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