Ideal Model in Education.
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Is it a ideal model in education? Since becoming an internet world, Educational methods are changing rapidly. When I was a student, I went to school with a heavy bag full of books. I saw and read a books, I wrote to my notebook with pencils. It is called 'Analog generation'. But nowadays, students have no books and have no bags. They are studying electronic-books(e-books) in school. Students in the country can also receive remote lesson, if they have a computers. Long time ago, students in the country take one or two hours only to go to school. It is a world where everything can be done with a computer. It is a called 'Digital generation'. Because educational tools people use are different, human thinking also can not help but change. Humans have been accustomed analog tools for thousands of years. It has been only a few decades since it turned into an analog tool. Analog tool in education is convenient and speedy, but it is a light and inhumanly. Which is a ideal model in education?
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Is it a ideal model in education?
>> Is it an ideal model in education?
Since becoming an internet world, Educational methods are changing rapidly.
>> Since we live in an internet world, educational methods are changing rapidly.
When I was a student, I went to school with a heavy bag full of books.
>> correct!
I saw and read a books, I wrote to my notebook with pencils. It is called \'Analog generation\'.
>> I saw and read a book, I wrote in my notebook with pencil. It is called \'Analog generation\'.
But nowadays, students have no books and have no bags.
>> correct!
They are studying electronic-books(e-books) in school.
>> correct!
Students in the country can also receive remote lesson, if they have a computers.
>> Students in the countryside can also receive remote lessons, if they have computers.
Long time ago, students in the country take one or two hours only to go to school.
>> Long time ago, students in the countryside took one or two hours to go to school.
It is a world where everything can be done with a computer.
>> correct!
It is a called \'Digital generation\'.
>> correct!
Because educational tools people use are different, human thinking also can not help but change.
>> Because the educational tools people use now are different, human thinking also can not help but change.
Humans have been accustomed analog tools for thousands of years.
>> Humans have been accustomed to analog tools for thousands of years.
It has been only a few decades since it turned into an analog tool.
>> It has only been a few decades since it turned into digital.
Analog tool in education is convenient and speedy, but it is a light and inhumanly.
>> Digital tool in education is convenient and speedy, but it is light and inhumanly.
Which is a ideal model in education?
>> Which then is an ideal model in education?
Great job! You efficiently and clearly gave your opinion about the topic. Keep it up!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Is it a ideal model in education?
>> Is it an ideal model in education?
Since becoming an internet world, Educational methods are changing rapidly.
>> Since we live in an internet world, educational methods are changing rapidly.
When I was a student, I went to school with a heavy bag full of books.
>> correct!
I saw and read a books, I wrote to my notebook with pencils. It is called \'Analog generation\'.
>> I saw and read a book, I wrote in my notebook with pencil. It is called \'Analog generation\'.
But nowadays, students have no books and have no bags.
>> correct!
They are studying electronic-books(e-books) in school.
>> correct!
Students in the country can also receive remote lesson, if they have a computers.
>> Students in the countryside can also receive remote lessons, if they have computers.
Long time ago, students in the country take one or two hours only to go to school.
>> Long time ago, students in the countryside took one or two hours to go to school.
It is a world where everything can be done with a computer.
>> correct!
It is a called \'Digital generation\'.
>> correct!
Because educational tools people use are different, human thinking also can not help but change.
>> Because the educational tools people use now are different, human thinking also can not help but change.
Humans have been accustomed analog tools for thousands of years.
>> Humans have been accustomed to analog tools for thousands of years.
It has been only a few decades since it turned into an analog tool.
>> It has only been a few decades since it turned into digital.
Analog tool in education is convenient and speedy, but it is a light and inhumanly.
>> Digital tool in education is convenient and speedy, but it is light and inhumanly.
Which is a ideal model in education?
>> Which then is an ideal model in education?
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