Identify my motivation

Good afternoon, jenny~ um... after read your tips to learning English, I asked to myself. "why do I want to learn and promote English?". First of all, I like English. Learning and Exporsing Enghish more and more, I feel happy. In addition I want to have a job using English and with foreigners. through i want to experience another custom and make a foreign friends. Actually, when I met foreigner in my company i worried about my speaking in English. i could'nt speak English. just listened their conversation and thought myself."they will annoy at my speakin. but Actually they might never mind it. I will stick my motivation in my mind and I will endeavor!

Good afternoon, jenny~ um... after read your tips to learning English, I asked to myself. "why do I want to learn and promote English?". Here are the corrections to your sentences.. >>good afternoon! after I read your tips on Learning English, I asked myself, "Why do I want to learn and promote English?". First of all, I like English. Learning and Exporsing English more and more, I feel happy. >>First of all, I like English. Learning and being exposed to English more and more makes me feel happy. In addition I want to have a job using English and with foreigners. >>In addition, I want to have a job using English and work with foreigners. through i want to experience another custom and make a foreign friends. >>though i want to experience other customs and gain more foreigner friends.  Actually, when I met foreigner in my company i worried about my speaking in English. i could'nt speak English. >>Actually, when I met a foreigner in my company i was worried about my English speaking skill, I couldn't speak English well. just listened their conversation and thought myself,"they will annoy at my speakin. >>I just listened to their conversation coz I thought  they will be annoyed with my English.   but Actually they might never mind it. >> but actually they might not notice it. I will stick my motivation in my mind and I will endeavor! >>i will stick to my motivation in learning English and i will constantly endeavor to succeed!  Keep the good faith and im sure you will succeed!