Idioms

2013-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

학생이 쓴 원문

1. All out A: Tom! Have a breakfast! B: Please give me 10 minutes, mom. My home work is not all out. C: Cool! Is that the new bat? It looks great, doesn't it? D: Yes, of course! It is all out. 2. Against the clock A: Please keep your mind that we don't enough time to meet our target of 2013. B: Don't worry, Sir. We keep promoting new service and we almost reached to our goal. In addition, we will finish our job assigned against the clock. 3. How would you contribute to our air reflecting on your working experiences and personality? I believe that I can be a good team member because I'm a outgoing and passionate person. I experienced in both of positions but I think I would better to be cooperative follower than team leader.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Thank you for doing you homework. I hope to hear your use those idioms in our class someday. See you! T. Sheela 1. All outA: Tom! Have a breakfast! >>Correct!B: Please give me 10 minutes, mom. My homework is not all out. >>Correct! >>B: Please give me 10 minutes more, mom. My homework is not all out. C: Cool! Is that the new bat? It looks great, doesn\'t it? >>Correct!D: Yes, of course! It is all out.>>Correct!2. Against the clockA: Please keep your mind that we don\'t enough time to meet our target of 2013. >> Please keep in your mind that we don\'t have enough time to meet our target of 2013. B: Don\'t worry, Sir. We keep promoting new service and we almost reached to our goal. In addition, we will finish our job assigned against the clock. >>Don\'t worry Sir., We keep promoting new services and we almost reached our goal. In addition, we will finish our job assigned against the clock.3. How would you contribute to our air reflecting on your working experiences and personality?I believe that I can be a good team member because I\'m a outgoing and passionate person. >>I believe that I can be a good team member because I\'m an outgoing and passionate person. I experienced in both of positions but I think I would better to be cooperative follower than team leader. >>I experienced being in both position and I think that I do better as a follower than a team leader.

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