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Do you have enough free time?
I don't have enough free time since I have a lot of thing to do everyday. Busy schedule doesn't allow me to have enough free time.
How do you spend your free time?
I want to do a lot of things in my spare time. Most of time, I exercise and study English. I'm trying to exercise and study English at least one hour every day. Exercising is for caring my high bleed pressure and studying English is for my self-improvement. During the weekend, I play musicul instrument at church or ride a bike with my family.
Who do you spend your free time with?
I've been trying to spend my free time with family.
When I spend my free time with my family, I feel happy. And If I spend more time with my family, it makes my family's relationship more stronger. So Recently, I bought for my family members bicycles. and I've been trying to ride a bike with my family.
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Wonderful monday morning to you Mr. [Name]!
I\'m sorry for the late corrections.
I was not able to correct last weekend your compositions.
There was no internet connection at home so I did not do all the compositions.
Anyway, there is no much correction in your compositions.
Just have time to browse some below.
Thank you!
Always,
Kathrine
Do you have enough free time?
I don\'t have enough free time since I have a lot of thing to do everyday.
>> ....... since I have a lot of things to do everyday.
Busy schedule doesn\'t allow me to have enough free time.>> My busy schedule doesn\'t allow me to have enough free time
How do you spend your free time?
I want to do a lot of things in my spare time.
>> CORRECT
Most of time, I exercise and study English.>> Most of the time, I exercise and study English.
I\'m trying to exercise and study English at least one hour every day.
>> CORRECT
Exercising is for caring my high bleed pressure and studying English is for my self-improvement.
>> To exercise is to care for my high blood pressure and to study English is for my self-improvement/to imporve myself.
>> OR: Exercising is to care for my high blood pressure and studying English is for my self-improvement/to imporve myself.
During the weekend, I play musicul instrument at church or ride a bike with my family. >>During the weekend, I play some musical instruments at the church or ride a bike with my family.
Who do you spend your free time with?
I\'ve been trying to spend my free time with family.
>> CORRECTWhen I spend my free time with my family, I feel happy.>> CORRECT
And If I spend more time with my family, it makes my family\'s relationship more stronger.
>> CORRECT
So Recently, I bought for my family members bicycles.>> So recently, I bought bicycle to each of my family members.
and I\'ve been trying to ride a bike with my family.
>> CORRECT (***capitalization- And)
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